Raw consciousness

Did I capture
Consciousness
In its rawest

She asks me
Sarcastically
After I’ve written

I know
She really means,
“Pay attention to me!”

She won’t admit
She doesn’t like when I write
When I’m with her

But her question
In the first place
Was rather apt

I go back
And read what I wrote
To give her an answer

August 08, 2021 at 02:14PM